Post production feedback

In this section I've have shown my magazine pages to my fellow peers and they have commented on the strengths and weaknesses of the pages.

Below are the comments.

The strength of my front cover:

• Looks professional
• The colours used go well together
• Font chosen is good
• The background compliments the font

The weaknesses of my front cover:

• Model could be facing towards the camrera
• Could of added something on the top right as there is too much free space
• You cant really see ''Mr Calaamansi'' properly so i could have changed the colour of the font

The strength of my contents page:

• The sub headings stand out and are relevant
• Easy to read
• Pictures used all go well together
• Fonts used

The weaknesses of my contents page:

• The design looks plain
• The layout of the text
• The number of the pages seem not to be in a straight line going downwards

The strength of my double page spread

• Picture used goes with with the colours used
• Colours used all compliment each other well
• Layout
• Text is easy to read
• The line behind the model gives the magazine a unique feel

The weaknesses of my double spread:

• First page of the double page spread (could of added a bit more as it seems to have space)
• The model on the first page seems a bit to dark
• the two strips of line would be made smaller as it takes up too much space on the page